Chapter 17 Page 13

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Another try at telepathy balloons. Thank you, commenters, for weighing in on the previous page (which I’ve updated to match this style, too). After a good bit of finagling and cajoling (and minor bouts of screaming at modern technology), I figured out how to get Clip Studio’s balloon tool to make balloons that look a little more akin to the ones I drew by hand in previous chapters. The style may still be subject to further tweaks and adjustments, but I like how they turned out so far. What do you think? Are these easier to read?

Thanks to Kip’s creator Chandrey for the “king face” line, which was taken pretty much directly from the roleplay chat log.